Five Night at Lust

parece que encontrei uma ouro aqui, um desenvolvedor brasileiro algo muito raro de se ver, vou baixa e ver se é bom estou com as expectativas bem altas aqui.

Okay, I'll write this one as I'm playing along:

Praise:

• A faithful recreation of that one other game, without just slapping screenshots of the establishment really shows dedication.

• I like that its 2d drawings make it pop above the other 12 FNAF R18 games.

• Nice talking head scenes and actual scenes overall. Clara's call was a highlight, plus the characters having a slight movement while they periodically blink, Not even the top ren'py novels do that!

• I loved the way you diegetically introduced the gallery, even though I tend to like having EVERY possible scene after they happen, like Frenni against the glass or Clara's call, the videos mechanic is great.

• It is a welcomed surprise that there are diverting paths and animations. Frenni made me think twice about how much I wanted that job "Maybe I should open the door". Her giving different responses depending on the complement made me appreciate the effort.

• Again, appreciating things like the whole scene's tone changing depending on your choices or there being rewards for doing as you are told through the new video with chiku

• Doing the different stages of the scene the length of the video is genius.

Complaints:

• The map should be point and click to teleport or "walk" to the room (for your character to follow a route) so it doesn't miss events. I know it's kind of a hard thing to program but it would be a really good way to improve navigation, which is a problem in itself.

• The navigation needs some adjusting. The first SECOND of gameplay already seemed annoying since I was left to explore the establishment without ANY other indication of where to go except for the character to toss some observation. I got stuck for a moment there because I missed one of the rooms that was right next to the office.

Nitpicks:

• Repeating the same "Shock" mp.3 in the span of 9 texts is annoying. Maybe putting the original Freddy laugh or only putting it when she jumpscares you when you first see Frenni would be better and reworking the scene in some way.

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• There are times in which the main character refers to one of the girls as "He/him/his", the translation is wrong or says weird things like "Of those who think that is of those whose fault" instead of "And who's fault is that?". There are noticeable times in which the Portuguese slips up like when referring to the new guy as "Cara novo" instead of "new face" or saying "Security" like a surname instead of "security guard", "Guard" or "Mister". I'd suggest someone who natively speaks the language to give it a look.

Suggestions:

• Make an introduction of the place with Clara guiding the player through every room or at least the base one through an actual introduction so that we can have at least a visual. Idk if a "This is your office, now, let's go out to the corridor and let me show you the rest of the place" and maybe if you choose either left or right you get a walk-through of the place. Maybe with a CG of her trying to be flirty or her getting down to grab anything on the floor with the main character getting a look at her assets through her pants or smth.

• Making non-chosen paths scenes unlockable
  • It could be in a secondary way like playing minigames, romancing the animatronics in some way or a gallery unlocker after finishing the game because it WILL get too complicated down the line, especially with like 4 scenes being mutually exclusive.

TL;DR:

Overall it's looking great and I see a lot of potential Growth. I'll be ecstatic to follow!

If you need someone to double-check the English translation I'd love to just help the project.